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  1. Miscellaneous Fanfiction Writing Thread (Solicit Advice Here)

    Quote Originally Posted by TagumonYatsuray View Post
    Hey everyone! I've finally found motivation to try working on my writing again, and I've encountered an issue with my scene-pacing style/format.

    It feels to me as if the gaps-in-time; or the 'jumps between locations' are either too frequent or too sudden or just strange/out-of-place in general...

    I've included an EXCERPT from my story here; since actually 'Showing' the problem is probably way more effective than just asking for advice on something no-one can see.

    Updated April 10th, 2018 at 11:03 PM by TagumonYatsuray