TagumonYatsuray

Originally Posted by TagumonYatsuray

Hey everyone! I've finally found motivation to try working on my writing again, and I've encountered an issue with my scene-pacing style/format.

It feels to me as if the gaps-in-time; or the 'jumps between locations' are either too frequent or too sudden or just strange/out-of-place in general...

I've included an EXCERPT from my story here; since actually 'Showing' the problem is probably way more effective than just asking for advice on something no-one can see.

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