Shinogu

I've already asked for critical feedback comments on the thread for the fanfic itself, so I'll just get what's on my mind out here instead so I don't clog it up there.

And I guess I'll say that there's spoilers for the final part of Conception/Zero's Chapter 1 in this entry. You have been warned, etc. Let's roll.

I almost feel like the Tohsaka Bad Luck happened to strike me as I wrapped up the update. Everything seems right and fit for launch, then BAM there's a massive problem that I overlooked that screws the entire thing up. I guess the problem with beta'ing one's story with someone who knows the future events of the story is that they aren't giving those first-impression reactions that one might run into, huh? I guess that's the first lesson learned.

Holy crap did I not anticipate that the immediate take-away would be "Rin is dead! Not just dead, dead for reals!!" I've got big plans for Rin in the events to come, I don't know what would have been wrong with me if I actually went through with that. I'm sorry that it read the way that it did, truly truly sorry. ._.

I suppose further thoughts will be posted here, if not in the comments if anybody reads this. See you guys.

-STK