So I'm the route I'm writing for that visual novel I mentioned awhile ago is well underway. But I'm having some issues with the backstory. Without going to deep into the plot,the heroine of the route I'm writing is a robot girl who looks to be about 11 -and yes its a romantic route- but I'm questioning why the main character, who is 19, would build a robot who looks like a little girl. What do you guys think?
Updated November 21st, 2012 at 03:08 AM by gothic_dolly
Thanks for the responses everyone, and especially you Ms. Seika. I gutted a few chunks (like the tobacco connection. It appears nowhere else in the paper, thus should be removed), and I reworked my thesis to better suit my paper. I really didn't look over it too much from that initial version. I finished it, posted it here and went to bed. I've done a few readovers on the beginning, and I think I've changed it for the better. What do you think of it now? This here is my newest version ...
Updated November 20th, 2012 at 03:10 PM by Nicktendonick
Well folks, the time has come. I'm going to do one last fanfic. And it's not based off of anything by Type-Moon. Yeah, those two plot bunnies I teased about? The "Rider and Waver re-enact retro 60s Batman hijinx" and "Fate/Extra, but with modern fictional heroes and villains as Servants" concepts? Those are dead. I'm never doing them. Shed a tear, my dear readers. But I know some of you might like the last fanfic I do! And you wanna know what's crazy? ...
As of tomorrow, I'll be giving limited shifts a try, so depending on how that goes, my actual writing schedule could be equally limited. If nothing else, I'm going to be on my feet for a length of time I haven't tried yet, in footgear that I'm still getting (re-)used to. So at the moment, things stand as: Next Fic to be Updated: Trinity VII: The Twilight Fic Completion Level: 0 pages (0%) Estimated Upload Date: Unknown, with more concrete information ...
You're probably going to ban me for daring to post this, but right now I do not care. This has to be said. From this moment forward, I will not talk to any of the moderators or admins on this forum, except about moderator-related issues, until such a time as you (as individuals, not a group) are willing to treat me fairly and communicate with me. Full stop. As far as I am concerned, it is like you are on ignore, since I unfortunately cannot actually ignore you. So, if ...
Updated November 19th, 2012 at 03:11 PM by SeiKeo