Originally Posted by TagumonYatsuray Hey everyone! I've finally found motivation to try working on my writing again, and I've encountered an issue with my scene-pacing style/format. It feels to me as if the gaps-in-time; or the 'jumps between locations' are either too frequent or too sudden or just strange/out-of-place in general... I've included an EXCERPT from my story here; since actually 'Showing' the problem is probably way more effective than just asking for advice on something no-one can see. ...
Updated April 10th, 2018 at 11:03 PM by TagumonYatsuray
Yes, it's April and there's still some time until summer, but there are people talking about Halloween on March, so who cares? The thing is that I couldn't sleep well last night, so I had a look at random FGO videos on Youtube. At 2AM or so I was watching for the 1,000,000th time a video about Berserk Nobbu's attacks and NP when I noticed that there was a pattern in both summer events. Here it is: God(-tier) organizer: The one to start all the stuff, and the free 4* we get ...
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