The Dark Side of the Moon (Kieran's Works)

Since my lack of braces and physiotherapy have pretty much screwed my writing schedule for the next week, at least, I've given you a pair of presents that will hopefully make up for it.

One is the long-vanished "Secret Bonus Ending" of "Legacies of Fate," since it was requested - and the other is the first chapter of an original piece I was hoping to submit to JukePop Serials before the writer's block hit. I'm hoping for feedback which will help me . . .

. . . At which point, granted, it will vanish from here and reappear on JukePop (with a lot of luck), but I'd still appreciate it.

Sorry for the delay in my other projects, though - I hope to do better in the new year.