I've already asked for critical feedback comments on the thread for the fanfic itself, so I'll just get what's on my mind out here instead so I don't clog it up there. And I guess I'll say that there's spoilers for the final part of Conception/Zero's Chapter 1 in this entry. You have been warned, etc. Let's roll. I almost feel like the Tohsaka Bad Luck happened to strike me as I wrapped up the update. Everything seems right and fit for launch, then BAM there's a massive ...