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Hello everyone.

This is the final version of my essay, which I've posted two "betas" of earlier. I've sent it to my teacher, and I do hope I did a good job on it. I have that nervous, "how am I going to do" feeling.

I'll tell you how I did when it gets graded. I wonder if what you think I'll get is what I really do.

Anyway, the entire report, the works cited, and my outline is in here in attachment in the zip.

I hope you ...

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• Do cellphones cause cancer final.zip (17.3 KB, 693 views)

Thanks for the responses everyone, and especially you Ms. Seika. I gutted a few chunks (like the tobacco connection. It appears nowhere else in the paper, thus should be removed), and I reworked my thesis to better suit my paper. I really didn't look over it too much from that initial version. I finished it, posted it here and went to bed. I've done a few readovers on the beginning, and I think I've changed it for the better. What do you think of it now?

This here is my newest version ...