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Natural Eye of the Mind not working? Never mind, he also gets the accumulated experience version too!

You're strong, True Archer.

(Also Nine Lives "Range: Whatever" hype).

Wait, so does this mean we finally have Archer Herk?

thanks for the kind words

This was a nice one.

Rich in allusion and very comfortable in execution. The mystery of the plot felt a little more complete with every suitor. Whatever the greater outcomes are, the unifying theme kept all the little variations in line.

I've enjoyed reading Tsuki no Ori immensely from the time you sent it to me, and I'm glad you chose me to be one of your betas.

I just have one confession: This was my first time betaing someone's work. I hope I did well enough.

It's obvious that you put a lot of thought into this, and reading this was fascinating.

Now I have to thank you all over again for giving me something else great to read. You really outdid yourself, You.

it's not lit crit though, it's a "creative writing" assignment, even if it says essay.

anthropology gave you litcrit?

Perhaps "Endowment of concepts" (or "Endowment of ideas") would be enough to distinguish it from capital-C Concepts?

By himself, he has no fighting power, however in exchange, however as long as his Master is safe

There's a repeated usage of "however".

Originally Posted by Christemo

>First South American Servant
>Generic jaguar warrior
>Its fucking Taiga

I hate you Nasu

Spoiler:

Quetzalcōātl doesn't count because Central American?

You go You!

Spoiler:

Dammit, Beowulf is on the list, was hoping to use him for a fic. Wonder if he'll be in Lugh? Back to my relegated Berserker it is then...

Oooh, Queen Medb! She better be hardcore and not get the Semiramis treatment!

Interesting how the same heroic spirit in different classes gets different artists, guess the different styles help differentiate them more. CasGil is gonna be interesting, hope Saber Dia turns out better than the current GO art...

okay all done.

Oh, other (very very minor) Ogre thing:

99% sure アマゾネス = Amazones (i.e. Greek Ἀμαζόνες, English "Amazons"), not Amazoness. A singular Amazon in Greek and Japanese has a long vowel, thus Ἀμαζών = アマゾーン.

Is "Atlanta" the new "Altria", I wonder

While I applaud the changes to Akhilleus' NPs ...

アグリオス・メタモローゼ
Agrius Metamorphosis

Why? It's Greek. It makes sense in Greek ("Wild Transformation"). Please don't try to make it Latin. Agrios.

Antares feels a lot lower tier than I thought. But I suppose it balances out how incredible Chiron is outside of his NP.

fixed. sorry about that.

Wait...

If Achilles is too regretful to use FITE ME IRL's true name,

Spoiler:

then how does he use it against Chiron?

http://i.imgur.com/Z9gCBF3.jpg
Robin Hood

http://i.imgur.com/TPek0YN.jpg
Mephisto

http://i.imgur.com/z4kOAsq.jpg
Blackbeard

Originally Posted by Demiurge

According to You:
Dragon Slayer.
Dragon special attack status, dragon special defense status 3 turns.
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He's basically Kojirou v2 now. Hooray!

Damages Dragons more and Dragons do less damage. (3 turns)

Revelation
Every turn one gains stars (3 turns)

The other two you need to unlock by ascension.
They are True Name Discernment
Divine Judgement.