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Originally Posted by TagumonYatsuray Hey everyone! I've finally found motivation to try working on my writing again, and I've encountered an issue with my scene-pacing style/format. It feels to me as if the gaps-in-time; or the 'jumps between locations' are either too frequent or too sudden or just strange/out-of-place in general... I've included an EXCERPT from my story here; since actually 'Showing' the problem is probably way more effective than just asking for advice on something no-one can see. ...
Updated April 10th, 2018 at 11:03 PM by TagumonYatsuray