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Does that mean that the rest of the week will be absolute poo as well? Or does it only get better from here cause I....

... got the shit out of the way?

can root choose human body to make them into vessel of the root? Or human just can connected to the root? i want make oc, so the plot of my oc is (s)he is a vessel of the Root.

BUT DEM GLORIOUS WINGS.

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Originally Posted by TagumonYatsuray

Hey everyone! I've finally found motivation to try working on my writing again, and I've encountered an issue with my scene-pacing style/format.

It feels to me as if the gaps-in-time; or the 'jumps between locations' are either too frequent or too sudden or just strange/out-of-place in general...

I've included an EXCERPT from my story here; since actually 'Showing' the problem is probably way more effective than just asking for advice on something no-one can see.

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