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Lilirulu

I found a way to make writing my VN(s) easier + VN Details

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I want to kick myself for not realizing to do this soon. This begin this:

>MC wakes up in field. Looks around.

>Sees he is being laid on by a really cute girl.

>Girl wakes up and introduces herself as Libri. Says she is his
'servant' and that he is a great hero that is supposed to save the
world from evil.

>MC freaks out saying he is not and he just wants to go home.

>Libri agrees (dishearteningly) to take him to someone who can send
him home.

>Libri tells him he is male.
Basically what I want to happen summarized so then it will make writing (and editing) easier in the long run. :3

Not much else on that thought.
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Anyways as for my VN I have several ideas but I have to that are in working stage (please ignore shitting working names). And all of this is subject to change~

Witch VN

Type: Kinetic (ATM)
Rating: "All Ages", 15+ (Violence)
Status: Scripting (15%) -Paused (World Building)

Summary: Elicia and Margaret Redgrave are sent on a mission by the Head Magic Power Place (temp) to investigate mysterious kidnapping on a tiny middle of nowhere island called 'Cattleya'. As soon as they dock upon Cattleya they are attacked by strange black shadows. After defeating the creatures and heading into the town. The two check into the Little Lemon Cafe & Inn and meet a strange pair of brothers whose magic is unbounded.
I think that is as basic as I can get the summary (the summary is (current) prologue, and the beginning most part of (the current) chapter one). It's paused for World Building becuase the world has some real importance on the plot and I need to flesh somethings out. One major thing right now is fleshing out how magic works.

Second VN is:

Fantasy Trap VN

Type:
Traditional
Rating:
'All Ages', 15+ (Violence,Gore,Sexual Themes)
Status:
Scripting (20%)

Summary:
Rian was helping his friend Cora clean her Uncle's magic shop. While cleaning Rian came across a strange book that he felt compelled to open. When he opened it a portal formed on the roof of the shop and sucked him into it.

When he woke up he was in a magical place with a cute girl laying on him. The girl wakes up quickly and tells him that he is a great hero that destined to defeat evil. Rian, however, is unconvinced by this and wants to go back home. Libri sadly agrees to take him to a mage that will be able to send him home.

Also, Libri is male. and a fairy.

...

...NOT THAT KIND OF FAIRY!

Along the way to the town the pair are attacked by bandits. Rian tries to fight them off and fails until Libri summons a magic sword from his book. The sword turns out to be a sentient and very sassy lady-sword, named Sara, who easily defeats the bandits. Rian has to stop her from killing one of the bandits and almost fails when Royal, a young knight-guard, shows up and takes the Bandits under arrest and Libri, Rian, and Sara to town. (They were heading in the wrong direction.)
This one has several routes I'll list all the ones I have planned down here:

  • Libri
  • Royal
  • Grander
  • Matroskya


Each route (similar to fate) will have there own story that coincides with the main 'goal' of the story. Thought it's a bit different in that you will be able to go through 'side stories' with the the other Love Interests, and non-Love Interests, kinda like side quests. And though it won't be an actual RPG/Dating-Sim (becuase RPGs are to much of a pain to put into Ren'Py and VNs cannot be done efficiently in an RPG maker) there will some minor plot-altering stat building in game.

@_@ So much writing~

--Lili

Comments

  1. Dark Pulse's Avatar
    So in other words, you discovered the importance of writing a "skeleton" as I call it.

    Yes, very important indeed.

    I'd recommend, for any writing in general, you start with three pieces: How it starts, the overall problem, and how it ends. From there, you can subdivide it down further and further and further until you get a per-chapter piece. Then you're ready to write your draft.

    At least, that's how I do it. Your mileage may vary, but I found having my ending known in my head helped me greatly, because then it wasn't "How the hell am I going to end this?" but "How am I going to get it there?" That's a lot easier to do, believe me.
  2. Lilirulu's Avatar
    @Dark Pulse: Yup. Up until now I was writing the scripts out in full instead of using a skeleton with caused me major pain when I needed to go back and change things.

    I don't think I can ever EVER kick myself enough for doing that. You would think all the years I have been drawing doing pretty much the same thing it would have occurred to me to use this method. I probably could have been farther along with the scripts too if I had done it soon. /Kicks self

    I also do the Beginning > Probelm > End thing too.
  3. Dark Pulse's Avatar
    Good, then you'll find it helps you greatly.

    Lots of stories die because, simply, the author doesn't think about it! They just get this neat idea, run with it, and when the fact they have no resolution comes up... it crashes and burns. Shame.
  4. Mike1984's Avatar
    Well, in my case, I tend to have a problem getting from the start to the resolution. I usually know how I want things to end (to the point that I've sometimes started writing sequels before I finish the original fic), and I usually know where I'm going to start, but I struggle to work out how to connect the two.
  5. Lilirulu's Avatar
    @ Mike: I sometimes come up with ideas for pre/sequels too. In the case of the Witch VN I have a two ideas for possible sequels and a prequel.

    I didn't find it very hard to connect the sequels to the story of the Witch VN but in one of my ideas it's really mostly it's own story and the original has little impact on it, while the other is a more direct sequel (it's also less fleshed out that the former) but I have a good idea on how to connect them.

    But maybe that was because I came up with the ideas while I was planning out the story so I was able to add in the details that would allow for the sequel(s) easily.
  6. Dark Pulse's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Mike1984
    Well, in my case, I tend to have a problem getting from the start to the resolution. I usually know how I want things to end (to the point that I've sometimes started writing sequels before I finish the original fic), and I usually know where I'm going to start, but I struggle to work out how to connect the two.
    You need to subdivide it further, then. Once you got a beginning, a middle, and an end, you create two more points: Something to move from beginning to middle, and something to move from middle to end.

    Then after that, you got four more points. Beginning to Beginning-Middle, Beginning-Middle to Middle, Middle to Middle-End and Middle-End to End.

    Keep slicing it down, and eventually you get to something that could roughly fit a chapter or two. That's when you're ready to draft.
  7. Mike1984's Avatar
    @Lilirulu: well, my sequels tend to be easy enough to write, because I know how I want the first story to end. However, it does lead to the possibility of me finding that my original ending just won't work, or wanting to change it slightly, and then finding myself stuck.

    @DP: Yeah, I guess. The problem is that, in general, what happens in the "middle" is mainly aimed at moving from the initial situation (for example, Sakura being not-saved) to the final situation (Sakura being saved). So, it's hard for me to easily pick a "middle" point because you can't exactly half-save a person (obviously, other stuff does happen, but that's the most obvious example). My fics do tend to be driven by the outcome I want to achieve (and the ones which aren't are usually sequels), and thus it's harder to set a mid-point in that way.