Hello everyone. This is the final version of my essay, which I've posted two "betas" of earlier. I've sent it to my teacher, and I do hope I did a good job on it. I have that nervous, "how am I going to do" feeling. I'll tell you how I did when it gets graded. I wonder if what you think I'll get is what I really do. Anyway, the entire report, the works cited, and my outline is in here in attachment in the zip. I hope you ...
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So I'm the route I'm writing for that visual novel I mentioned awhile ago is well underway. But I'm having some issues with the backstory. Without going to deep into the plot,the heroine of the route I'm writing is a robot girl who looks to be about 11 -and yes its a romantic route- but I'm questioning why the main character, who is 19, would build a robot who looks like a little girl. What do you guys think?
Updated November 21st, 2012 at 03:08 AM by gothic_dolly
Thanks for the responses everyone, and especially you Ms. Seika. I gutted a few chunks (like the tobacco connection. It appears nowhere else in the paper, thus should be removed), and I reworked my thesis to better suit my paper. I really didn't look over it too much from that initial version. I finished it, posted it here and went to bed. I've done a few readovers on the beginning, and I think I've changed it for the better. What do you think of it now? This here is my newest version ...
Updated November 20th, 2012 at 03:10 PM by Nicktendonick