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I create a world of finite somethings

...Hmm, sufficiently Nasu-y?

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So, in starting to write Shared Resonance, I sort of decided to begin things near the end of the story and then use subsequent chapters to tell "how we got here." Whenever I'm writing, I always find myself fighting with linear narrative conventions because starting a story in a linear fashion is oftentimes boring and predictable. So then I watch something like KnK, or Haruhi, or Baccano! and always enjoy how they mess around with that. Obviously, not everything is gonna work out that perfectly, but I really appreciate stuff that tries to think a little outside the box.

Anyway, it sort of led me to the conclusion that I can also hook people in a different way beyond that too, at least on BL: I can start the story with porny stuff instead of having to lead up to it. I'll probably do a censored version to put up on FFN since starting with something like that could potentially earn some trouble--most people don't care, but since FFN technically has the no porn rule, I only post stuff where porny bits are buried in the narrative and are not the focus.

But yeah, doing it this way, I actually also thought of something that gives the sex some plot relevance. Originally, it was just going to be an emotional thing--which, you know, is fine, but, well, I also kind of get to a point where if I'm gonna write porn, I wanna do something with it that I haven't in other stories. Difficult to do when everything is just, you know, vanilla sex.

So, we've got Sion, right. And she's slowly turning into a Dead Apostle. DAs consume blood for human genetic material to slow the breakdown of their own body, right. She doesn't want to do that, which is part of her deal in Melty Blood. Right, right. So, since it is literally for the "genetic material"...uh...it makes sense that a small source of human genetic material other than blood might help...right?

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Also helps with the later plot point if this part is believable. So...yeah. An excuse for more porn than I thought to include initially is good, right?
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  1. Dark Pulse's Avatar
    Well, considering that human saliva contains DNA, too (all human bodily fluids do, I think), you're kind of stretching a bit. Then again, to do that, she'd need to at least be frenching someone, and one thing could lead to another, and...

    That said, not Nasu-y enough unless there's seafood and Cthulhu in the sex.
  2. Aiden's Avatar
    Being able to use any and all bodily fluids instead of just blood?

    I'm fine with this!
  3. Arashi_Leonhart's Avatar
    Yes, I think saliva might, but I recall something from learning about HIV/AIDS that it would take something like two gallons of saliva to compare to a single ejaculation, and take something like half a dozen ejaculations to compare to blood--anyway, I keep thinking that Sion hasn't taken the blood-sucking plunge yet, so tiny bits of DNA compared to draining a body might just help curb things as opposed to make her worse.

    As for Nasu sex scenes, well, since we're talking vampiric urges, I guess I could slip in something about prostitutes and needing a fix...I mean, Sion is educated hurrrrrrr...
  4. Dark Pulse's Avatar
    Well, it's only natural semen would have more genetic material than saliva - look at its purpose, after all...

    I do wonder how Sion would come to the conclusion of semen over blood, especially since she's really work-driven (in this case, to find a cure.) Someone's kind of going to have to break this to her - I don't know if she'd reach that conclusion on her own, and even if she did, it'd probably be an act of desperation. And if it's a guy, no doubt there would be an urge to use the penis like a grand blood straw.

    ...Of course, if you're pairing her up with a girl, that changes matters entirely...
  5. Arashi_Leonhart's Avatar
    It's complicated. And completely AU, so before TATARI shows up...well, I'll get to it soon enough.

    And the pairing is with both a guy and a girl, haha.
  6. ItsaRandomUsername's Avatar
    Oh, finally getting to work on this? Excellente. I guess everyone's getting back into a writing mood this time of year.
  7. nununu's Avatar
    So, who's gonna show her the gangbang bukakke porn?

    /someonehadtosayit
  8. ZidanReign's Avatar
    Visual Writing porn is delicious.

    And Arashi your Avy and Title make D'awwwwww.
  9. Aiden's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by nununu
    So, who's gonna show her the gangbang bukakke porn?

    /someonehadtosayit
    Kohaku.