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Who He is (descriptive test :P)

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He never was that special looking to begin with. Not that he doesn't have any notable features. His sharp stare that could always strike people, adding it with his facial structure that would give the intensity vibe.
It's not like he actually is as intense as people make him to be. Unless provoked, he's actually quite kind but doesn't understand how to express it. His walk is always limp, as his shoulders are always relaxed, and his back is leaned a bit down most of the time he walks, giving him a defeated aura.
His clothes are somewhat simple.

People are his interest. He tends to be the 'all-ears' in the conversations because he enjoys observing them. What he does, what he doesn't, all are based on his judgement on people just by listening. It's like reading a book, or analyzing it's author, to be precise.

He's somewhat detached. More like, he's unable to link himself to reality. His dreams are who he is, which makes him come across as naive, but he doesn't care. Not a bit. For his wishes is what defines him, and he'll walk through life to fulfill them.
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My punctuation sucks, my vocabulary sucks even more, but I decided to take initiative and be courageous for once and try not to get defeated


I think my weak-point in writing is the fact that English isn't my main language, but I can't help it. I wanna write in English because writing in English can take you to bigger audiences, which means entertaining more people or even giving them something to grasp into.

I took some elements from my personality, and tried to write about it here in a free form. So not everything here's true :P.
The next time I'll try descriptive writing, I might try it on Perona from One piece or I might try to describe an environment .
Hopefully I'll see you tomorrow
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  1. SeiKeo's Avatar
    Someone remind me if show don't tell is in S&W.
  2. urca's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by LeopardBear
    Someone remind me if show don't tell is in S&W.
    Ehhh...sorry dude, I'm not really following what you're saying (comprehension phail :/)
  3. Five_X's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by urca
    Ehhh...sorry dude, I'm not really following what you're saying (comprehension phail :/)
    Strunkk & Whyte, notorious word gangsters.
  4. urca's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Five_X
    Strunkk & Whyte, notorious word gangsters.
    Ahh, I remember now @_@
    As in 'The authors of The elements of style'?
    I was told to check it out in my previous blog.
  5. Five_X's Avatar
    Rappers, not authors.
  6. urca's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Five_X
    Rappers, not authors.
    *Hides under a rock from embarrassment*
    I mixed them up with the authors of The elements of style
    The Elements of Style, also known as Strunk & White, by William Strunk, Jr. and E. B. White, is a prescriptive American Englishwriting style guide comprising eight "elementary rules of usage", ten "elementary principles of composition", "a few matters of form", a list of 49 "words and expressions commonly misused", and a list of 57 "words often misspelled".

    lol